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« on: February 12, 2014, 10:22:52 pm »
Example post part 1:
Sploosh!
Sapphire falls with a splash into the frigid water, tossed overboard by the ponies who she'd thought were her friends. She rises to the surface, gasping for breath and treading as best as she could while their voices recede, laughter and taunts galore. Still, she wouldn't give up hope. She wouldn't. She wou-
Something slaps at her legs under the water. She looks to see an eel swimming by, coming by again for another pass. She kicks at it but misses, it landing another stinging slap as it goes by. She readies for it to come again, but it doesn't, instead booking it in the opposite direction. Confused, she turns around just in time for the lip of a large whirlpool to expand and draw her in, spinning her around and around in its throes. It's moving, too, towards a reef.
So this is how it would end. No glory, no fame. Not even a friend. She looks to the sky, looking in vain at the stormy clouds for the star that had guided her course before she'd left her ship, hoping her friends would help her.
But they hadn't.
Since they had invited her to their ship, they had done nothing to further her goals, merely used her for their own ends and tossed her. She had no control anymore, no help. No hope. Her breath short, she clutched her head and waited for the reef, her tears mingling with the seawater on her face.
And then she's lifting up, out of the whirlpool and into the air. Her eyes are pressed closed, waiting to see what new, worse horror awaits her than to meet her end on the deadly coral.
No horrors come, though. She's set down from the gentle hold on her onto firm wood, and she looks down to it. Yes, it's there. Breath short, she looks up to the center of the ship she's on, up to the mast with torn sails. She beholds a tall, graceful mare the color of midnight. On her black-dappled flank rides a crescent moon that matches the regalia on her neck and head. Her wings are spread against the wind, holding herself and steering the ship like a mast, her horn glowing amid her mane that spreads upward until it mingles with and becomes the night sky, a clear beacon amid the churning storm clouds.
She just stares upwards in disbelief for a moment before the mare looks down to her. "Quickly, Sapphire! Mend thy sail! Thou wilt need it or thy ship shall sink!"
Sapphire blinks in confusion. Her ship? "What do you mean, my..." she begins calling up to the figure before looking to the door to the cabin. It's her cutie mark, two blue gems tied together. This IS her ship. "Who are you? How do you know my-" She's cut off as a wave washes over the deck, knocking her from her hooves with a shriek. "Help me!" She barely has the first sound out of her mouth before she's picked up in a gentle light, like being wrapped in soft silk, and she's righted on the deck again.
"Thy sail!" the midnight mare calls to her again, this time severing the cloth from the mast and levitating it over to her. It stops before her, then heads off to a nearby desk that conveniently happens to be there. She follows it and sits at a bench that wasn't there before, then grabs the cloth. One problem.
"I have no needle and thread!" she calls to the figure on her mast. "What should I-" Barely visible in front of her face is an ebony needle, trailing from it a glowing thread. She follows it back to its source. The moon. She's mend her sail with moonlight.
"Quickly, young one! The storm grows!" She nods and takes the needle and takes it to the cloth, heedless of the fact that she's never sewn in her life. She mends the tears one by one aided by the light of her thread and the flashes of lightning around them.
In much shorter time than it should have taken, she's finished mending the sail, the tears held together with silver thread. "Done!" she calls up to the mysterious mare, running back with it held in her teeth before tossing it up to the mast, where it guides itself to its proper place, filling with wind immediately and blowing them forward, away from the maw of the advancing whirlpool. At first it looks like the sudden shift of the ship tosses the alicorn from the mast, but she glides down gracefully, coming to a stop in front of the now much calmer Sapphire. "Thank you...thank you!" she says with a bow to her rescuer.
Thou art welcome, Sapphire, but the danger is not over yet," the figure responds with a stern look and a nod. "Thou art still engulfed in storm, and thy vessel is still in peril. There is yet more work to be done tonight if ye wish to reach safe harbor."
"Yes, yes, of course. Right away!" Sapphire rushes to the prow and looks forward. It's headed straight for a lighthouse. Perfect. "We're on a collision course! We need to turn!" she shouts to the regal mare standing next to her. "Quick, get us turned!"
To her surprise, the midnight alicorn shakes her head. "I cannot steer your ship. You must take the helm."
"What!? After the mess I made of it last time?"
"Yes. And you must do so quickly, before it becomes impossible for you to correct your course in time."
Sapphire cowers, drawing her hooves over her face. "N-no! I need help! I-I can't do it on my own! Why can't you steer for me?"
"Because it is your choices that choose your course." The mare reaches down and places her hoof on Sapphire's shoulder. "Others can help or hinder your path, but it is you and you alone who ultimately determines your destination. You saw what happened when you gave the choice over to others."
She uncovers her eyes and peers up at her rescuer. "But what if I need help again? Will I make it to where I want to go?"
"I cannot tell you that," the other responds, shaking her head. "And you may run against the rocks, or reach a dead end, or get tossed off course. I may not be able to save you again. But if you do not steer yourself, you will not reach your destination."
Sapphire sniffs and considers the mare's words. "O-okay," she says after a moment, then stands and rushes to the helm and turns the wheel, angling the rudder to change course away from the lighthouse and the rocks that it warned against. It barely makes the turn, scraping its hull against some but still remaining watertight.
The tall mare smiles at the other and nods. "I wish you well on your journey, young one," she says, tensing her legs in preparation to depart.
"Wait!" Sapphire calls. "What do I do from here? I can't see my star anymore!"
"You continue until you can. Keep hope, and you will catch sight of your goals again. For now, though..." She raises her head to the sky and gives a flap of her wings. A moment later the clouds split just enough that she can find her heading she'd been seeking.
Tears of joy sting Sapphire's eyes, and she wipes them away. "Thank you...tha-" But her benefactor has disappeared from the deck, nowhere to be found in the sky either. She peers in vain for her, but finds her not. "...Thank you..." she whispers, then turns forward, a new determination in her eyes.