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Ponyville / Re: Premonition
« on: July 21, 2014, 10:38:05 pm »
Hawkson watches Ruby head off into the Everfree, not really caring why she left, just that the snake was gone. Then, Hawkson realizes something. The entire situation he just went through could have easily been avoided if he had just left instead of freaking out when he saw the snake. It was rather shameful that someone like him, a rather well known detective,  hadn't realized this before but, as always, fear overcomes logic.

And frankly, now that the snake was gone, he should probably be on his way. He had important things to do, very important things, that would probably affect the rest of his life. So, he stood there for just a moment, considering whether he should stay and help the two ponies with the boulder and branches, then thought “!@#$ no.” and went on his way to the train station, leaving Dais with no awesome new friends to help him.

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Original Character Profiles / Re: Hawkson Heartfixer
« on: July 21, 2014, 03:39:43 am »
Hey, just letting everyone know that I've made somee small changes to Hawkson here. I've changed his special talent, modified his backstory as a result, and made a few smaller edits. Just telling everyone.

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Ponyville / Re: Premonition
« on: July 07, 2014, 12:42:12 am »
Hawkson is about to yell more obscene cuss words at Ruby, but the giant boulder lands directly in front of him, spraying him with dirt. He’s about to shout even MORE cuss words before he notices the filly standing on the boulder. Hawkson is probably the biggest A-hole in Ponyville and usually has no problems about saying curse words and yelling at anypony that rubs him the wrong way, but hes still got standards. And one of those happens to be to be nice to foals. Especially the adorable ones, like the one on the boulder.

Hawkson temporarily ignores the whole snake thing and brushes himself off. He’s about to ask why a filly that looked like she just got out of school was carrying a boulder that almost horribly murdered him before her and Dais start talking. Wait why did he need boulders? What was he, Daring Do? Did he like to run from them with catchy music playing in the background?

Hawkson is just left there with a confused look on his face as Carri lifts the boulder and Dais says something about a tree branch.

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Ponyville / Re: Going Off The Rails
« on: July 06, 2014, 03:16:08 pm »
Hawkson is walking towards the train when he feels a tap on one of his shoulders. Apparently the mare he bumped into waned to know where the train was going. It should be fairly obviously but whatever. “Its going to Canterlot. It leaves in five minutes so you better get a ticket and get on real quick if you want on, honey.” Hawkson then continues on his way.

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Ponyville / Re: Going Off The Rails
« on: June 25, 2014, 02:06:26 am »
Hawkson Heartfixer levitated the ticket he may or may not have bought with stolen money into his hooves. Alright, you’re one step closer to moving you and Vec to Canterlot Heartfixer. He would move to Ponyville but… Well it got attacked by Cerberus a while back soooo… Yeah. Hawkson quickly checks how many bits he has left, which is quite a *bit*. See what I did there? Seeeeeeeeee? OK anyways, Hawkson trots towards the train after checking that he wasn’t overcharged. At least not more overcharged than they were already. I mean, 200 bits for a train ticket? !@#$ing 200 bits!

On his to the train he accidentally bumps into a mare with dark grey coat with a rather basic rose cutie mark. She has eyes that are emerald green and her mane consists of teal and navy blue. She was rather pretty, but Hawkson doesn't have time for that.

He halfheartedly mutters “Sorry.” and continues on his way.

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Ponyville / Re: Premonition
« on: June 14, 2014, 02:32:07 am »
Hawkson gets up up and brushes himself off as Ruby calls over to him. He mutters something along the lines of "Stupid !@#$%^, such an @!#hole..." with the strongly worded insults directed at Ruby, in case you couldn't tell. Hawkson is slightly surprised that Dais would let such a beautiful cuss word slip like that, but thinks nothing of it.

Hawkson narrows his eyes at Dais as he begins explaining another one of his absolutely brilliant plans. "Wait a second, you do realize that whatever it is you're going to say won't work and even if it does we'll just ignore you because, frankly, nopony gives two !@#$s right?" Hawkson says, turning to Dais and interrupting him before he can finish suggesting they all go on a canoe ride to bond as friends or whatever. Hawkson then notices that Ruby's snake is still around. his eyes  widen and he hides behind Dais, exclaiming "Unless, of course, your plan involves brutally murdering the serpent over there ans, in which case, feel free to kill the !@#$ing thing." He then proceeds to cower behind Dais like a 3 year old.

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Ponyville / Re: Premonition
« on: May 27, 2014, 09:24:43 pm »
Hawk winces as the snake just about horribly murders the blue unicorn. He keeps his eyes locked on the snake as it wraps around the magenta colored one. It would probably have murdered them all by now if the magenta unicorn hadn't obviously cast some sort of taming spell on it or something like that. Otherwise it would have horribly ripped them into pieces by now.

Hawkson listens to the magenta one use the sarcasm that defined him against him. He suddenly adjusts himself to be sitting on the branch with his back legs hanging off, which was an admittedly uncomfortable condition, and raises his front legs in a sort of X  and then motions the X shape towards her, his own little motion for "!@#$ you you stupid little !@#$!" But as he does the branch makes another "SNAP!" and breaks, making Hawkson fall with a line of curse words that would immediately kill a foal's innocence if they heard it. 

He lands directly in front of the blue unicorn with another curse word rhyming with "bunt" as the blue one finishes saying how Hawk should get down before the branch breaks. Idiot.

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Ponyville / Re: Premonition
« on: May 25, 2014, 10:32:18 pm »
Hawkson clings tighter to the branch as the snake as it flicks it's tongue out at him. He's about to flip the snake and its owner off (however a pony does that) before the magenta colored unicorn says the snake can climb. Wait, what?He ignores everything else she says after that and climbs up a branch higher in the tree.

Oh then Captain Obvious, hero of the ponies, speaks his all knowing wisdom. Oh thank you for pointing out that Hawson is scared of the snake? Should Hawk clap for you? He doesn't, obviously.

Wait... What? Ok frankly, that plan is !@#$ing stupid. Like what is that guy on? Hawk could use some right about now. And no, he wasn't going to read some stupid book. And what he trying to sound like? The Power Ponies? Superheroes don't even talk like that.  And Hawk should know, he encountered one like five minutes ago.

Instead of responding to any of the blue unicorn's crap Hawk just continues clinging o the branch before he hears a "SNAP!" and feels to the branch start to break.

"Well !@#$..." Hawkson mutters to himself.

(Sorry if I'm being a little too sarcastic here and offend anyone.)

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Ponyville / Re: Premonition
« on: May 23, 2014, 03:17:16 pm »
Hawkson just ignores the magenta colored mare's question about how he got up the tree so fast. He'd climbed a many a thing in his life of occasional thief-ness and guard chase scenes, the least being trees. Though he didn't say any of that. Instead he just awkwardly lay there on the tree branch, his yellow eyes locked on the snake.

When the blue unicorn who presumably had too much caffeine, and possibly other things that can't be referenced here, came rushing over his eyes leave the snake for a bit and watch him do... Whatever it is he's doing with his tail. He immediately looks back at the the snake when the blue unicorn is done sputtering his nonsense, Hawkson still cowering on the branch.

He listened in on explanation of what happened from the magenta unicorn. He'd usually laugh at "tree himself" but fear tended to push humor back. He still didn't take his eyes off the snake as the magenta one told him the snake was harmless. He was about to come up with a snarky response but the snake, foul beast it was, draped itself over her neck a bit, causing him to whimper a bit and cling tighter to the branch.

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Ponyville / Re: Premonition
« on: May 23, 2014, 01:19:03 am »
Another oh so beautiful day in Ponyville, like it ever wasn't. Not with the ever oh so loyal and brave Rainbow Dash and her committed team of pegasi on weather patrol. You know, when they weren't all sick. Still, Hawkson couldn't help but envy them, flying around, free as can be. Hawk had only flown a couple times in his life himself. But enough about old memories and impossible dreams.

Hawkson walked down the rather colorful streets of Ponyville with a bag of bits in his hoof.  His disguise spell had worn off at this point, fully revealing his cutie mark and returning his voice back to normal. He brushed a loose strand of peach-ish colored hair out of his eye while he slowly walked along, lost in thought.

So maybe he had stolen the bits in his hoof, big deal. Not like the mare really needed all those bits anyways. She probably had some extra money in a bank account or something. And he planned to pay her back three fourths of the bits if he got the chance. Ok half. Ok a fourth. Look he needed a train ticket to Canterlot to find a house or apartment. He had some old friends to help him in Canterlot he just needed the train ticket, then he'd be good on bits for a while. He'd promised Vec he wouldn't steal but... Well whatever he did was in her best interest. He'd thought he'd have to do something like this so he left her back in Phillydelphia with some neighbors who'd send her down when he sent them a letter. Vec didn't really like him stealing and he had to admit it was a bad influence on her but what could he do? They had to eat.

And, logically speaking, he'd earned the bits at this point right? It was suppose to be a simple job. The local thief liason around here, called Cloaked Dagger, pointed out a pony he could steal from pretty easily and how he could do it. The guy was a professional and he liked to help the less fortunate become the fortune if they brought some rich snobs down a peg. He cast the disguise spell on himself, ate a bit to help him get his energy back, and went off to find her. It all went smooth until that masked pony showed up. Cloaked said if he did it right nopony would really look for him, he'd make sure of that. Nothing was said about superheroes. His eyes still hurt a bit from that bubble mix he got in his eye. What kind of idiot plays with bubbles in an alley anyways? Like, seriously?

Hawkson is so caught up in his thoughts he doesn't even notice a magenta unicorn resting under a tree until he almost trips over her. "Oh sorry, didn't see you there." He says in a gruff voice. He then notices the python wrapped around her.

"OH MY !@#$ING FAUST, WHY ARE YOU HOLDING THAT THING?" Hawkson loudly yelled, jumping away from the mare and climbing up the tree a little and cowering on a branch in an attempt to escape the scaly serpent of assured death if he went near it.   

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Original Character Profiles / Hawkson Heartfixer
« on: May 20, 2014, 04:12:52 pm »
Name: Hawkson Heartfixer

Race: Unicorn

Gender: Stallion

Age: 35

Physical Description: He’s got the body of a runner, slim, lean, and a muscular tone. He’s shorter than average for his age, maybe a solid inch or so. He has a dark grey coat with a spiky,shaggy,dark peach-ish mane with some parts a lighter shade. His tail is long and dark peach-ish. He has pointy, curved ears. His horn is long and a bit curvy. He has dark yellow eyes. He also has a small bit of beard that is also dark peach-ish. He wears white leather bands around his knees and a white neck collar. He also wears white clogs on his his front legs, but wears more complicated and more comfortable white wrap up shoes, held together with yellow latches on his back legs. He likes to wear a fedora while hes working. His cutie mark is a magnifying glass.

Special Talent: He’s a private detective, often specializing in missing ponies cases and the paranormal.

Likes: Flying, Anything that flies (Birds and Hawks especially), Heights, Foals, Stealing, The unknown, Finding something new, Latin.
 
Dislikes: Magic, Snakes, Being underground, The dark.

Strengths: Extremely fast runner, Understands that life can be quite weird and ridiculous and even really really dark and is quite alright with that, He can be quite sneaky if he needs to and happens to be quite the thief, Can speak latin.

Weaknesses: Fear of snakes, Fear of the dark, Prefers to run rather than fight if given the option (though he’ll still fight if needed), He can be a bit too sarcastic at times when it’s not appropriate, Is pretty bad at magic, Doesn’t like authority or being told what to do.

Magic: Though he’s pretty bad at magic he knows a few spells. (there’s some more that I'll add later on)

Magic Beam: A basic offensive combat spell. It cast a magical beam from the user’s horn, hitting a designated area. Since Hawk is really bad at magic the beam is slower than it usually would be and is not as damaging. It take a bit out of Hawkson, though he recovers quite fast.

Disguise Self: A rather high end spell meant to temporarily disguise the user and change their physical qualities and voice. Usually it would allow for a high end magic user to make themselves look however they wanted and change their voice slightly for about an hour, within reason. But since Hawkson is a very low end unicorn the spell only allows for the disappearance of his cutie mark and a high pitched voice, only lasting for 20 minutes or so, and it usually takes quite a bit out of him, usually taking a bit to recover.

Levitation: Basic levitation known by most unicorns. Its simple to cast even for Hawkson, making it tk almost no energy unless its something big that's being levitated.

Fears: Snakes, The dark.

Bio: Hawkson was abandoned as a colt when he was 5. He doesn't remember his parents nor does he care about them. Hawkson grew up on the streets of Canterlot, living off what he could steal or money he could get for the occasional odd job. The only friend he had was a stray hawk he tamed, which died a few years later. He'd often get in trouble with the guards or get tracked down by ponies trying to get him to go to an orphanage, resulting in his extremely fast running speed.

When he was 12 a friend of his went missing. He found his friend lost in the sewers. After he found him he noticed his cutie mark. He didn't particularly care about the mark itself, more just about the fact he knew what he was supposed to do from then on.

When he was 18 he moved from Canterlot. He had no idea where he was going or what he was doing, all he knew was that he needed to get out of Canterlot since he was legally allowed to ride a train without being harassed.

He spent the next 15 years as a wanderer, doing jobs when he could to make money and stealing when he had to, but never really settling down for more than a few days. This earned him a bit of a reputation.

When he was 33 Hawkson was given care of Vector after he solved a case involving the deaths of her parents. He took her in and officially adopted her. For the first year he's had Vec he wandered around with her. He quickly figured out the wandering life wasn't for her. Since then he and Vec have lived in a couple places but, due to unfortunate events, had to leave.

He's now trying to move back to Canterlot to try and give Vec a proper place to live, though he’s unsure if its really a good place to take care of her.

He’s a rather paranoid pony, though usually friendly enough. Though if somepony rubs him the wrong way he’ll most likely cuss them out and aggressively snark them to death.  He’s been around the block quite a bit and understands what he believes life to be, a confusing mess of events filled with the best and worst of everything. He is willing to do what it takes to breathe another day, even if it means having to steal a little. Not like they need all those bits anyways. Some are put off by his satirical sense of humor.

Extra Details: Has officially adopted Vector Sketch (Who is another OC I’m working on at the moment, she’s not entirely finished yet) and is very protective of her. Also, I’m the worst at bios.

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